I think your face is great. Don't sell yourself short. You are doing a good job.
When I look at the first pic I do not see the eyebrows. In the closer ones I see thay are red. If you made them black that would be more contrast against you skin and they could be seen from a distance. I also happen to think red around the eyes is not very friendly.
I love the shape you your mouth and your eyes seem to be in just the right place also.
And as to the tramp or not to tramp question. I agree with fitz about the marketability of these charactors. I think it takes an enormous amount of talent and experiance to be a tramp/hobo. Maybe that is just because it is the hardest for me. I also believe those are two different things. A tramp is shabbier. The hobo has patches but they are cleaner and generly happier. I learned a lot about this subject from Homer of California while at clown camp. If you can find a video of him you will see a GREAT show, and a marketable one. He is a hobo.
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