Markie,
My first impression was that your website had too much text. I honestly didn't want to take the time to read that much. Even the Contact page had too much text.
If you are using the website to learn HTML and play around, that is great. If you want to use it to market yourself, I suggest you cut back on some of the text.
Your Flash animation is cute, but I didn't have the latest version of Flash installed on my computer. If you can save the animation to an older version of Flash, that will be useful for many of your visitors. Unless, it requires a feature only available with Flash 9.
Next suggestion would be to add some space between the main links. Home Page Services Pricing Contact all run together and don't look like links.
Just a thought.
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