Thanks for the info. I'm somewhat sorry to the Infotainer for letting him think I wasted his time, I sure didn't mean him to do anything he saw as a waste of his time. But free advice is just that - free, including of the obligation to take any or all of it.
Thanks to everyone else for their ideas. I decided that the fact I'm a Christian isn't that important because the people it matters most to are most likely to hear about me from church and word of mouth, and the kind of people who might like a website or find it are less likely to care or may even be put off.
I tried to word everything as concisely as I can word everything I feel I need to say. Honestly Sir Toony, when I go to your website the first thing I think is "I want more to read" LOL. We all have tastes. I build to my tastes thinking along those lines. I do thank you for your input and I really did reduce the run-on from how it first was.
The retro style is totally intentional. I like it
LOL, I know, you're cringing Infotainer. I care about everyone's opinion, but I also first and foremost stick with what I first think and like...
Blessings to all of y'all! And thanks for all your advice, even the parts I didn't take,
Mark