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05-04-2008, 04:25 PM
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Got my website up...
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05-04-2008, 05:05 PM
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Very nice Markie.
   
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05-04-2008, 11:16 PM
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The web site looks great. The copy (word ad) should be more concise. Leave out the part about other facepainters not being good. The fact that "they may use acrylic paints which can be uncomfortable and cause allergic reaction" is good enough. Giving your opion on whether they are good or not sounds unprofessional. The line "I'm pretty good" is weak and not nessecary, I can see by the photos the quality of your work. If you want to say something funny and more positive say, "I'm the best face painter in the country, of course all the really good facepainters live in the city."
This line is not clear and it doesn't have an ending parenthesis, "(call and I think you'll be surprised just how much so for what you get! Both most likely are typos. The pics are good I like the way they float up with the balloons. I love the butterfly face.
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05-04-2008, 11:33 PM
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I need better pictures, they're not the best work of mine by any means. I just haven't taken many good pics. The pics I thought were gonna be the best have usually not turned out
 Anyways, I wrote that up quickly and I changed what you noted. Thanks and blessings,Mark P.S. for example that butterfly is kinda not my favorite way to do it at all, both those butterflies are messed up LOL but they're the only butterfly pictures I've had that've turned out. That's what you get trying to snap snapshots at an event and get model releases. I need to get a few of my cousins to model for me some saturday afternoon when we can have the time to get good photos!
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05-05-2008, 12:29 AM
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It looks great. It definitely looks better than my website, but then again, everyone's websites looks better than mine!
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05-06-2008, 08:20 PM
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I assume you don't have a website Darrell? LOL
 I just added a few more photos and rewrote things so it wasn't stuff written at 2am...
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05-06-2008, 08:51 PM
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I want the floating pictures and popping balloons!!!!!!!!
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05-06-2008, 09:04 PM
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Then get the floating pictures and popping balloons... BannerZest
*smiles* it really is a cool program Last edited by Markie : 05-06-2008 at 09:13 PM.
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05-07-2008, 03:46 PM
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Did you get my e-mail??
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05-07-2008, 05:25 PM
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Nope I did not. mark@comicexpressions.com . I hope my email works. Try mark@markuhde.com too.
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