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Old 07-26-2008, 03:33 PM
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I've attached a picture of my first pseudo-clown outfit. I made the pants, but went with a normal shirt that has clown-like stripes. The makeup I used was professional, and I followed a method for applying it that I had seen on YouTube. The actual features I'm not sure about, I just sort of tried out a look. Sorry about the freaky red eyes. That happens to me at night...

So, if you have any suggestions to offer, I'd be happy to hear them. Or if there's anything that you think looks good, let me know. I'm just starting to explore my clown look. Thanks much!
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Old 07-26-2008, 03:37 PM
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Oops! That's a bit small. Can anyone tell me how to post a larger image?
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Daisy I really like the face. It Looks VERY good! I think you have a good look going on. The pants look good with the shoes and match the shirt.
I think the one thing that I would do is to add a white blouse under the top. Just to give you a bit more skin cover. I also like the pig tails.
Great job!
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I think you look great. I wish I could my makeup as well. I agree with what scruffy said; you probably don't want to show that much skin. Not fun in the summer, is it? Love the shoes!
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I think you look great. The face is fantastic. If anything, the costume is just a bit heavy on green. I'm wondering whether you might add some orange on top opposite/diagonal from the orange part of the pants somehow to counterbalance things a bit.
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you look grate like others said maybe a tshirt under the green shirt. Its just thing so people wont try to say anything not nice about you more or less & oringe T-shirt would work grate with the oringe & green you got going on
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Thanks everybody for your feedback! I do have an orange and green top that I made to go with the pants, I just don't like it because it's HUGE! I'll try it again and see if it grows on me.

Oh man, I was hoping I could get away with wearing a t-shirt in the summer. Oh well!

Tim--I love the color green. I think that's why I wear so much of it. It doesn't seem like too much to me, but then I could paint my entire house green and think nothing of it. Anyhow, I will try to balance it out with more orange. I also like a green/pink combination and might try that, too.
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Dont worry about tomuch green Daisy I mean look at me I wear lot of green
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Pic a little small for me to see, but from what I can, the face looks good, Like the others either a different shirt or t-shirt

I think you could get by with a t-shirt, perhaps one is the orange wtih over sized caped sleeves added in the pants color.

You just don't want a low scooped neckline, as with kids you could be bending over, or squating and have a higher neck line is just one less thing to worry about.
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I think your makeup looks REALLY pretty ... very smooth and professional.

I'm with the others on the top ... why don't you show us the one you made to go with the pants ... you know, you're a clown ... big is ok unless it's falling off of you. I think I would probably like the matching top better.

Your shoes are cute with your outfit.
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