Bonkers and Clowning_Around: you are preaching to the choir. Better yet you are preaching at a preachers convention.
I am for supporting, helping and educating this guy as much as he will let us. Clowning is a pretty esoteric art. Until you study and/or practice it you won't really know much about it. The easy to find information on clowning is mostly superficial and unhelpful. The good stuff you really have to dig for. The easiest way is to find a clown or two and just ask (if there are any around)... and that is exactly what Johnny has done. Most of the writers out there don't even bother... and he has already shifted his idea twice! I think that is pretty cool.
Fear of clowns mostly stems from a ignorance of clowning. The solution of ignorance is education. If he gets the right information from real clowns here and other places, his book could actually be quite educational when it comes to the art of clowning and the people who do it. Honestly, I don't think it is going to work if he has a mere clown mafia. The characters would be flat... it is a single gag, and the results would be annoyingly predictable.
But if you have clowns and the mafia, then you have a difference in world view, and something interesting. Then if you have a character going from one world view to the other it is even more interesting. Since it is a comedy, a clown going to the mafia (from a positive to negative world view) wouldn't work, but the other way around would. It would still sound like Sister Act, but since one is a movie, and the other a book, it should be okay.
So lighten up. We have nothing to loose by helping him and everything to gain. He could have just written the whole thing and never asked.
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Snugglesnort the Rhymer.
"Humor is the only test of gravity, and gravity of humor; for a subject which will not bear raillery is suspicious, and a jest which will not bear serious examination is false wit." -- Aristotle
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