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Old 05-17-2008, 09:46 PM
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I finally completed my character!!

Moe the Fire Clown is born!!
(Not pitured: my modified airpack that I use for filling my balloons)

What do you guys think? Anything you would change?

Love to hear from you.

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Old 05-17-2008, 09:58 PM
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What a Cute fireman!

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Old 05-17-2008, 10:59 PM
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Nicely done,
One thing I would add, and guys hate to hear this, but putting eyeliner just under your lower lashs, and applying mascara would really make your eyes more visible.

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Old 05-17-2008, 11:02 PM
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So cute! If my house were burning to the ground, I would definitely be cheered up if you arrived!

Also, I love the name. I have a new kitten named Moe.
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Old 05-17-2008, 11:34 PM
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There's just something about a clown in uniform. You look great!!
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Old 05-18-2008, 05:04 AM
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Wow I like the whole thing. No Offense but we have several clowns on our Fire Dept. What's that Oh my bad they are a different kinda clowns. LOL
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Looks great
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Looks great! I wanna see this air pack thingy though...

Really Moe, the only thing I think I would change would be to bring the white area in a little. So that it it moves a little more with your facial expressions.
Looks great with the mustache BTW.
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Old 05-18-2008, 10:41 AM
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Congrats on putting together your new character.
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Old 05-18-2008, 07:11 PM
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Hey Firemoe, looks like there is no stopping you now! You are on a roll.
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